Sunday, November 9, 2008

"Perfection" at a cost

I knew she'd see, right from the start,
my love was free, hers'd cost my heart.
Now seeing right through it, this feeling I'd fight
Brown eyes now knew it, bright eyes shut tight
I offered all I had left, all hers for the taking,
With this heart in my chest, she'd heal of its breaking.
In that instant forgotten; the lust that we'd known
long since had rotten, our blossom that'd grown.
This split up our path, which at first seemed so lonely,
though she could turn back, mine's one way only.
The heartbreak she'd dealt, with that smile she'd force
That crush that I'd felt, had now run its course...
Brown eyes now've dried, blue eyes ever clear,
My clouds begin to hide, blue skies have now appeared.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Love for free,
a path that’s one way only
forced smile
a crush…
blue skies
a heart no longer lonely!

just a game
i've played with ur words :P

I'm glad u got ur blue skies back...

Silly Girl said...

... so u got ur blue skies back, and flew away?

Geoff said...

haha, not at all. I've just been quite busy lately, no time to write. I'm still here though, don't worry. :)
Once I'm able to relax again, I'll start up something new.
These past few weeks have been an emotional climax of sorts. So many faces I'd missed, voices I've longed to hear again, are now back in my life. It's quite a difference having people who genuinely care about me around.
...and I'm positive that there'll be at least one piece written about it all in the near future.:)

Silly Girl said...

good!
i'll be around :)